HOMEWORK 10/28, About learning a foreign language
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello Oh,
Thank you for being active in class, I can see that you are really trying your best to improve your skills in English.
Have fun in learning, Oh!!!
T. Jeny
Dear [Name].
>>correct
Sorry for not long sentence.
>>Sorry for the short sentences.
please kindly understand for insufficent time to write my homework because of many things to do today.
>>Please, understand I have a lot of thing to do at work so I haver insuffecient time to do my homework.
Have a goood remaining time !
>>Have a good time!!!
The basic factor that everybody is very fond of learning a foreign language is global era nowadays.
Companies is becoming more globalize.
>>Companies are becoming more globalize.
Those need global resources who can read and speaking a foreign language.
>>They need global resources who can read and speak a foreign language.
The resources have a lot of advantage in the promotion or salary aspect.
>>The resources have a lot of advantages with their promotion and salary.
As noted statistically via mass media like TV, newspaper.
>>As noted statistically via mass media like the TV and the newspaper.
The person who can do a foreign language are higher than otherwise in the earning aspect.
>>The person who can speak a foreign language can earn more income.
In addition, There are several factors in the all parts like education, culture, society, art, etc.
>>In addition, there are also other several factors to consider like education, culture, society, art, etc.
Even though We know the places there are necessary documents, If we can not read the documents, There are no usefulness.
>>Even though, we know something about the place but couldn\'t read their language, it is useless
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