Homework 10.3
학생이 쓴 원문
What is the purpose of Facebook?
What are the best things about Facebook?
: Just few years ago, Facebook is the most common sns for teenagers. At that time, they uploaded picture of them or their day. Also, they have made friends through Facebook messenger. But now, teenagers usually use Instagram more then Facebook
강사 첨삭
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~ Teacher Tricia
Just few years ago, Facebook is the most common sns for teenagers.
>> Just a few years ago, Facebook is the most common SNS for teenagers.
At that time, they uploaded picture of them or their day.
>> At that time, they uploaded pictures of them or their day.
Also, they have made friends through Facebook messenger.
>> Also, they have made friends through Facebook messenger.
But now, teenagers usually use Instagram more then Facebook
>> But now, teenagers usually use Instagram more t[이름] Facebook.
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