homework 10.31
학생이 쓴 원문
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think it’s dangerous for children to go trick-or-treating?
In my opinion, it\'s dangerous for only children to go trick-or-treating.
If we watched movies or animation, only children go around their neighbor\'s houses and
receive candy from their neighbors.
But, I think the reality is different.
It\'s because there are many bad or weird people in real life.
That\'s why I think kids need adults when kids go to trick-or-treating for safety.
But In Korea, it\'s hard to see the original trick-or-treating.
I think trick-or-treating culture it\'s not fits Korean people well.
So, we proceed a little bit different way.
For example, we do small event is held at school.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. Your ideas and opinions are on point. Keep it up! :)
~ T. Camille
~ Writing Task:
Please answer the question:
Do you think it’s dangerous for children to go trick-or-treating?
In my opinion, it\'s dangerous for only children to go trick-or-treating.
Please answer the question:
Do you think it’s dangerous for children to go trick-or-treating?
In my opinion, it\'s dangerous for only children to go trick-or-treating.
>> CORRECT!
If we watched movies or animation, only children go around their neighbor\'s houses and receive candy from their neighbors.
>> If we watch movies or animation, only children go around their neighbor\'s houses and receive candies from their neighbors.
But, I think the reality is different.
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because there are many bad or weird people in real life.>> CORRECT!
That\'s why I think kids need adults when kids go to trick-or-treating for safety.>> That\'s why I think kids need adults when kids go trick-or-treating for safety.
But In Korea, it\'s hard to see the original trick-or-treating.
>> But in Korea, it\'s hard to see the original trick-or-treating.
I think trick-or-treating culture it\'s not fits Korean people well.
>> I think trick-or-treating culture doesn\'t fit well among Korean people.
So, we proceed a little bit different way.
>> So, we proceed a bit differently.
For example, we do small event is held at school.
>> For example, we do small events held at schools.
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