Homework 10/31
학생이 쓴 원문
In what way is learning English an adventure for you?
English is the meaning of an encouragement or a confidence to me.
The goal of learning English is, surely, to talk and work with global people.
That's the reason why even though I know that a score of TOEIC is important, I'm struggling with conversation skill.
I think that the best way to learn English is making a environment that I frequently speak English a lot.
Go to the road, or apply different global activities, meet a lot of foreigners and talk with them.
I also know this truth, but, it is difficult to do it.
Because I always pursue to be perfect, and I think that I should volunteer it when I have a good English skill.
Even though I'm enough to volunteer it, I think myself as the man who are not good at English.
This 25 minutes class is giving me a confidence and encourage me to have an adventure constantly.
Sometimes, I need to think simply, and act like an idiot.
강사 첨삭
Happy happy Wednesday, Ian!!:)
How are you doing today?
I hope that you had fun yesterday with your colleagues.
Great job in doing your homework.
I will see you later.
~ T. Lorna^-^
>> Learning English means encouragement or confidence to me.
The goal of learning English is, surely, to talk and work with global people.
The goal of learning English is, surely, to talk and work with global people.
>> Correct!
That\'s the reason why even though I know that a score of TOEIC is important, I\'m struggling with conversation skill.
That\'s the reason why even though I know that a score of TOEIC is important, I\'m struggling with conversation skill.
>> This is the reason why even though I know that a score of TOEIC is important, I\'m still struggling with my conversation skill so I need to study more.
I think that the best way to learn English is making a environment that I frequently speak English a lot.
I think that the best way to learn English is making a environment that I frequently speak English a lot.
>> I think that the best way to learn English is having an environment where I can frequently speak English.
Go to the road, or apply different global activities, meet a lot of foreigners and talk with them.
Go to the road, or apply different global activities, meet a lot of foreigners and talk with them.
>> Go on the road, join different global activities and meet a lot of foreigners and talk with them are good ways to improve my conversation skill.
I also know this truth, but, it is difficult to do it.
I also know this truth, but, it is difficult to do it.
>> I also know these truths, but, these are sometimes difficult to do.
Because I always pursue to be perfect, and I think that I should volunteer it when I have a good English skill.
Because I always pursue to be perfect, and I think that I should volunteer it when I have a good English skill.
>> I always pursue to be perfect and I think that I should volunteer myself when I already have good English skills.
Even though I\'m enough to volunteer it, I think myself as the man who are not good at English.
Even though I\'m enough to volunteer it, I think myself as the man who are not good at English.
>> Even though I know that I am physically able to volunteer, I still think of myself as the man who is not yet good at English.
This 25 minutes class is giving me a confidence and encourage me to have an adventure constantly.
This 25 minutes class is giving me a confidence and encourage me to have an adventure constantly.
>> This 25 minutes class is giving me confidence and encourages me to have an adventure constantly.
Sometimes, I need to think simply, and act like an idiot.
Sometimes, I need to think simply, and act like an idiot.
>> Sometimes, I need to think simply and just act like an idiot.
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