Homework 10.5
학생이 쓴 원문
Describe a time when weather broke your plans.
: I used to meet my friends in weekend. One day, I made an appointment with my friends on Saturday afternoon.
But that morning, It began to rain like a waterfall. So, we could not meet that day. I was so sad.
강사 첨삭
1. I used to meet my friends in weekend.
>>I used to meet my friends at the weekend.
2. One day, I made an appointment with my friends on Saturday afternoon.
>>One day, I made an appointment with my friends on a Saturday afternoon.
3. But that morning, It began to rain like a waterfall.
>>CORRECT
OR>>But that morning, It began to rain heavily.
4. So, we could not meet that day.
>>CORRECT
OR>>So, I couldn\'t see them that day.
5. I was so sad.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I was super sad.
Great homework, Michelle!
-T. Melody ^^
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