HOMEWORK 10/5, facing challenges

2015-10-06 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Dear jeny. Thanks for your lesson for mumbling. I always effort not to mumble, but It is too difficult now for me. = body == In conclusion, I agree that facing challenges improves a person. But It is vary difficult and need self courage. In case of challenge situations, many persons first want to avoid that. Conversely thinking, If don't challenge, Anythings could not be gotten. Proverbs have that Crisis will soon be a chance, and that Opporunity knocks only once. Proverbs above is especially important to youth. and I will be continue to challenge forward. Otherwise, I will be falling into mannerism someday.

강사 첨삭

Hello Oh!!!

We all face challenges in life but it differs on the way we handle  it. So, we need to be strong and be firm in dealing challenges in life.

Just think positive and everything will be fine.....Smile!!!!

Thank you for you homework, you were able to express you opinion about the topic. Great job!!!

I know that learning is a challenge but you just have to do your best in order for you to be successful

T. Jeny

 

Dear jeny.

>>correct
Thanks for your lesson for mumbling.

>>Thank for the lesson about mumbling.
I always effort not to mumble, but It is too difficult now for me.
>>I always try not to mumble but it\'s too difficult for me now.
= body ==
 In conclusion, I agree that facing challenges improves a person.

>>I agree that facing challenges improves a person.
But It is vary difficult and need self courage.

>>But it is very difficult and it needs courage.
In case of challenge situations, many persons first want to avoid that.

>>At first, people want to avoid challenges.
Conversely thinking, If don\'t challenge, Anythings could not be gotten.

>>Conversely thinking, we can\'t gain anything if we don\'t have any challenges in life.
Proverbs have that Crisis will soon be a chance, and that Opporunity knocks only once.

>>There are some proverbs related to this situation, \"Crisis will soon be a chance,\" and \" The opportunity knocks just once.\"
Proverbs above is especially important to youth. 
and

>>These proverbs are important to young generation.
I will be continue to challenge forward.

>>I will still move forward with all the challenges in life.
Otherwise, I will be falling into mannerism someday.

>>Otherwise, I will fall into a mannerism someday.

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