Homework 10

ESSAY: What is something that you are most scared of? I'm scared of the sickness of my family the most. About 9 years ago, my mother was very sick, and I could not do anything for her and just watched her being sick. She recovered and she is okay now, but I can not forget how hard it is for family to watch her. After that exprience, I realized that health is the most important in life, and people around me have to be healthy for my happiness.

Hi there [이름]!^^ Thank you for sharing this!^^ You are absolutely right that health is the most important priority in our lives. I also had a similar experience and yes it is very painful to watch. It\'s great that your mom had recovered!^^ Enjoy the trip to the island. Have a great day ahead!^^ T.Debby^^ Here are my corrections for you today: I\'m scared of the sickness of my family the most. >> I\'m scared of my family getting a sickness the most.About 9 years ago, my mother was very sick, and I could not do anything for her and just watched her being sick. >> CORRECT OR> My mom was very ill 9 years ago and i was noy able to do something for her.She recovered and she is okay now, but I can not forget how hard it is for family to watch her. >> CORRECT OR> She got over it but the memory of watching her stayed with the family.  After that exprience, I realized that health is the most important in life, and people around me have to be healthy for my happiness. >> CORRECT OR> After what had happened, I now know tha value of health and that people must be healthy for us to be happy.