homework(10/6)
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Kaye.
Honesty, I can not study in english hard in these day.
Sorry about that.
Anyway, I know that story about bullying in the company.
There is a crazy man in the every company.
If you move to the other company, you want to avoid him.
You will meet another crazy man in that company.
If there isn't a crazy man...
you might be him or her. ^^;
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I got your composition and I am very glad to know
that you are doing your homework. Keep up the great job, okay?
Here are the corrections I made. And no, I am definitely not crazy.
I assure you. haha. You made me laugh today, thanks. ^^
Hello Kaye.>> Great!
Or> Hi there, Kaye.Honesty, I can not study in english hard in these day.
>> Honestly, I am finding it hard to study English these days.Sorry about that.>>Great!
Or> I apologize for that.Anyway, I know that story about bullying in the company.
>> Anyway, I know a story about bullying in the company.There is a crazy man in the every company.>>There is a crazy person in every company.
If you move to the other company, you want to avoid him.>>If you move to another company, you will want to avoid him.
You will meet another crazy man in that company.>> If you do, you will meet another crazy man in that company.
If there isn\'t a crazy man...>>If there is no crazy man,
you might be him or her. ^^;
>>You might be the one.
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