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2014-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kaye

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Hello Kaye. Honesty, I can not study in english hard in these day. Sorry about that. Anyway, I know that story about bullying in the company. There is a crazy man in the every company. If you move to the other company, you want to avoid him. You will meet another crazy man in that company. If there isn't a crazy man... you might be him or her. ^^;

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Hi [이름]! I got your composition and I am very glad to know that you are doing your homework. Keep up the great job, okay? Here are the corrections I made. And no, I am definitely not crazy. I assure you. haha. You made me laugh today, thanks. ^^  Hello Kaye.>> Great! Or> Hi there, Kaye.Honesty, I can not study in english hard in these day. >> Honestly, I am finding it hard to study English these days.Sorry about that.>>Great! Or> I apologize for that.Anyway, I know that story about bullying in the company. >> Anyway, I know a story about bullying in the company.There is a crazy man in the every company.>>There is a crazy person in every company. If you move to the other company, you want to avoid him.>>If you move to another company, you will want to avoid him. You will meet another crazy man in that company.>> If you do, you will meet another crazy man in that company. If there isn\'t a crazy man...>>If there is no crazy man, you might be him or her. ^^; >>You might be the one.

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