homework 10

2016-06-27 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Is leadership an art or a science? Actually, I don't understand following the sentence totally. But i think that art and science are involved in leadership. Approaching sciencific aspect, leadership will be helped as to use sciencific method. Sciencific method are consist of the objective facts likes employee's attendence and leaving time to the office or their profile. when the leader observe their employees, the things help them to grasp it easily. And art aspect is to see their detail emotion at the office life. Leaders have to notice employee's emotion through their acting. Because team means leader and others and if one of them quit the job as to their emotion are destroyed any other, the team would be look for a new assistant. So i think that the team's leader also need to has a art grounding.

강사 첨삭

Hi there my dear Sun, happy Monday! It\'s been nice talking with you today. Thank you so much for doing a great job. Two thumbs up for a job well done! Take care and have a great day! xoxoTeacher Cam^^ Is leadership an art or a science?Actually, I don\'t understand following the sentence totally.>>I actually don\'t understand the following question.But i think that art and science are involved in leadership.>>correctApproaching sciencific aspect, leadership will be helped as to use sciencific method.>>correctSciencific method are consist of the objective facts likes employee\'s attendence and leaving time to the office or their profile.>>Scientific method consists of the objective facts likes employeess\'s attendance and their profile.when the leader observe their employees, the things help them to grasp it easily.>>When leaders observe their employees, those things help them grasp them easily.And art aspect is to see their detail emotion at the office life. >>And in the art aspect is to see their detail feelings in the office.Leaders have to notice employee\'s emotion through their acting. >>correctBecause team means leader and others and if one of them quit the job as to their emotion are destroyed any other, the team would be look for a new assistant.>>Because team means leadershipand if one of them quit the job it means it\'s time for them to look for a new assistant.So i think that the team\'s leader also need to has a art grounding. >>correct

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