Homework 10.7
학생이 쓴 원문
Talk about an important skill you learned.
: I learned debate skills while participating a lot of debate competitions in school. The skills are as follows. First, It is important to check a sources of my basis. Because sources have a important role in debate. And, It is important to listen opponent\'s basis attentively. I became better at debating through using these skills.
강사 첨삭
1. I learned debate skills while participating a lot of debate competitions in school.
>>I learned debate skills while participating in a lot of debate competitions in school.
2. The skills are as follows.
>>CORRECT
OR>>They are the following.
3. First, It is important to check a sources of my basis.
>>First, It is important to check the sources of my basis.
4. Because sources have a important role in debate.
>>It is because sources have an important role in debates.
5. And, It is important to listen opponent\'s basis attentively.
>>And, It is important to listen to the opponent\'s basis attentively.
6. I became better at debating through using these skills.
>>I became better at debating by using these skills.
Very good, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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