HOMEWORK 10/7, completion sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name].
Thanks for your compliment today.
See you tomorrow.
Have a happy day !
== body =
1. Civility can flourish, but only if the upcoming generation take some action.
2. When it comes to success, a majority of people assume that making it to the top needs hard work and maturity.
3. The question isn’t who is going to let me, it’s who’s going to work with me.
4. The Indian woman has come a long way in terms of carving her own identity in fields hitherto dominated by the male workforce.
5. Radha is an extremely talented dancer but is shy by nature. Her master advised her to to perform in front of crowd.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Oh!!!!
I always do enjoy talking with you. It is a great feeling to know that you are eager to learn new things in English. I want you give your best in remembering all the things you\'ve been learning so that you can apply it in our classes.
Please check the corrections I made and remember to take note of all the corrections so that you\'ll not make the same mistake.
T, Jeny
Dear [Name].
>>correctThanks for your compliment today.
>>correctSee you tomorrow.
>>correctHave a happy day !
>>correct== body =1. Civility can flourish, but only if the upcoming generation take some action.>>Civility can flourish, but only if the upcoming generation decides to spread that quality around.2. When it comes to success, a majority of people assume that making it to the top needs hard work and maturity.>>When it comes to success, a majority of people assume that making it to the top 3. The question isn’t who is going to let me, it’s who’s going to work with me.>>The question isn’t who is going to let me, it’s who’s going to stop me4. The Indian woman has come a long way in terms of carving her own identity in fields hitherto dominated by the male workforce.>>correct5. Radha is an extremely talented dancer but is shy by nature. Her master advised her to to perform in front of crowd.
>>Radha is an extremely talented dancer but is shy by nature. Her master advised her not to hide her light under a bushel.
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