Homework 10.9
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you get annoyed when other people display bad manners? Give some examples.
: When I walk on the street with my friend, I can see many people who display bad manners.
Most of them, smoking in the street is the most worse manner for me. Once, a man was smoking in the street though there is baby in front of him. I thought it is really bad for baby. I hope them to smoke in smoking room.
강사 첨삭
1. When I walk on the street with my friend, I can see many people who display bad manners.
>>CORRECT
OR>>While walking on the street with my friend, I can see many people who display bad manners.
2. Most of them, smoking in the street is the most worse manner for me.
>>Most of them are smoking on the street, and that is the worst manner for me.
3. Once, a man was smoking in the street though there is baby in front of him.
>>Once, a man was smoking in the street though there is a baby in front of him.
4. I thought it is really bad for baby.
>>I thought it is really bad for the baby.
5. I hope them to smoke in smoking room.
>>I hope them to smoke in the smoking-room.
Nice essay, Michelle!
- T. Melody ^^
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