Homework 10/9
학생이 쓴 원문
"Beauty is in the eye of the beholder."
I don't think that everything in the world is beautiful, and I cannot change the world beautiful too.
But I can try to look at the world beautiful.
When I was in KTX(Korean train express) to Seoul, a baby behind my seat was crying so loudly.
The louder he cried, the more I was irritated.
At that time, I was upset and curious at why his parents don't care him.
I was about complain it to their parents, so I stood up and looked at them.
His parents were look similar to my sister's ages and my nephew who is coming soon came up to mind.
In addition, although I know that babies are the power of future, it is hard to hear crying of a baby because of lowering rate of birth in Korea.
From then, it sounds like a song of hope and I could enjoy it.
Through this experience, I realized that there is a nothing beautiful in the world.
But I can just accept it as beautiful.
강사 첨삭
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How\'s everything?
Thanks for the effort in doing your homework.
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~T.Lorna^^
>> I don\'t think that everything in this world is beautiful and I cannot change the beauty that this world has.
But I can try to look at the world beautiful.
But I can try to look at the world beautiful.
>> But I try to look at the world as a beautiful place.
When I was in KTX(Korean train express) to Seoul, a baby behind my seat was crying so loudly.
When I was in KTX(Korean train express) to Seoul, a baby behind my seat was crying so loudly.
>> When I was on a Korean train express (KTX) to Seoul, a baby behind my seat was crying so loud.
The louder he cried, the more I was irritated.
>> Correct!
At that time, I was upset and curious at why his parents don\'t care him.
At that time, I was upset and curious at why his parents don\'t care him.
>> At that time, I was upset and curious on why his parents didn\'t try to stop him.
I was about complain it to their parents, so I stood up and looked at them.
I was about complain it to their parents, so I stood up and looked at them.
>> I was about to complain to his parents so I stood up and looked at them.
His parents were look similar to my sister\'s ages and my nephew who is coming soon came up to mind.
His parents were look similar to my sister\'s ages and my nephew who is coming soon came up to mind.
>> His parents who have the same age as my sister reminded me that I have a nephew who is about to be born soon.
In addition, although I know that babies are the power of future, it is hard to hear crying of a baby because of lowering rate of birth in Korea.
In addition, although I know that babies are the power of future, it is hard to hear crying of a baby because of lowering rate of birth in Korea.
>> I know that babies are the power of the future but unfortunately, it is hard to hear a baby cry nowadays in Korea because we have a very low rate of birth these days.
From then, it sounds like a song of hope and I could enjoy it.
From then, it sounds like a song of hope and I could enjoy it.
>> Correct!
Through this experience, I realized that there is a nothing beautiful in the world.
Through this experience, I realized that there is a nothing beautiful in the world.
>> Through this experience, I realized that there is nothing more beautiful in this world.
But I can just accept it as beautiful.
But I can just accept it as beautiful.
>> Correct!
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