Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
(Essay) Do colors affect your mood? What colors make you feel happy or sad?
YES, I do.
The color that makes me happy is red.
Because red looks intense and lively.
On the other hand, the color that makes me sad is orange.
It is similar to the sunset color, so I always feel a longing.
강사 첨삭
Hello Miss. [Name]! Thank for sending in your homework. Colors affect people\'s mood depending on the meaning they evoke. Have a good day!~~T.Dee
>>Yes, it does.
The color that makes me happy is red.
The color that makes me happy is red.
>>CORRECT!
Because red looks intense and lively.
Because red looks intense and lively.
>>It\'s because red looks intense and lively.
>>OR: The color that makes me happy is red because it looks intense and lively.
On the other hand, the color that makes me sad is orange.
>>CORRECT!
It is similar to the sunset color, so I always feel a longing.
It is similar to the sunset color, so I always feel a longing.
>>It is similar to color of sunset so I always feel a longing.
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