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I could be born again, I want to be born in Thailand. Because, When I went to the Tailand, the food is very delicious and very cheap. Especially I like tropical fruit. I saw fish under the sea is so beautiful and peaceful. So I want to be born in Thailnd.
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Hi [이름]!
That was really quick! You are one diligent student. Way to go! I agree that Thailand is a beautiful place to visit. You should also try traveling to the Philippines in the future. ^^
-Rachel
I could be born again, I want to be born in Thailand.
>> If I could be born again, I want to be born in Thailand.
Because, When I went to the Thailand, the food is very delicious and very cheap.
>> Because when I went to Thailand, the food was delicious and cheap. (We use the past tense to say stories that happened in the past)
Especially I like tropical fruit.
>> I especially like tropical fruits.
I saw fish under the sea is so beautiful and peaceful. So I want to be born in Thailand.
>> When I went snorkeling the fish were so beautiful and the scene under the sea was beautiful and peaceful.
So I want to be born in Thailand.
>> correct
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