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I try to avoid homeless when I come across them in the middle of a street. However, I don\'t do that because I fear them. What I am really afraid of is the possibility that I could be involved in something annoying. I think most homeless have a mental problem so that I cannot predict what they would do. They could throw something to me or beg for some money or even they could pick fights to me. That\'s why I try to avoid streets where the homeless hang around.
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>> I try to avoid homeless people when I come across them in the middle of a street.
However, I don\'t do that because I fear them.
>>CORRECT
What I am really afraid of is the possibility that I could be involved in something annoying.
>> CORRECT
I think most homeless have a mental problem so that I cannot predict what they would do.
>> I think most homeless people have a mental problem, so I cannot predict what they will do.
They could throw something to me or beg for some money or even they could pick fights to me.
>> They might throw something at me or beg for some money or even pick a fight with me.
That\'s why I try to avoid streets where the homeless hang around.
>> CORRECT
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