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IA company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory? Explain your position. Well, if a large factory locates in our community, many people can get a job and regional economy can revive. But if we live nearby the large factory, we might have a number of problems. Our river can be contaminated and the air may full of pollution. For people, both the money and the nature are important. So If I can get a decision, I will support the factory. But the factory will be given the regulation from the community and they must follow the rules.

Superb, Haily! I love your composition! Thank you so much. Keep going! Teacher Michelle Here are some corrections for you: IA company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your community. >>Correct Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. >>Correct  Do you support or oppose the factory? >>Correct  Explain your position.>>CorrectWell, if a large factory locates in our community, many people can get a job and regional economy can revive. >>Well, if a large factory stands in our community, many people can get a job and the regional economy revives.But if we live nearby the large factory, we might have a number of problems. >>Correct Our river can be contaminated and the air may full of pollution. >>Our rivers can be cintaminated and the air can be full of pollution. For people, both the money and the nature are important. >>For people, both money and nature are important. So If I can get a decision, I will support the factory. >>So if I make a decision, I will support the factory. But the factory will be given the regulation from the community and they must follow the rules. >>But the factory will be given the regulations from the community and they must follow the rules.