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Laughter is very important in our life. Because, laughter make energy. And laughing decreases your stress. And I heard \'laughing increases your life span by an hour\'. I also agree. In a proverb, \'Smile brings good luck\'. Therefore laughter is important.
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Hello [이름]!!!
Nice answer on your essay. Hehehehe
We need to laugh all the time so that we would live long.
Take care!!!
T. Jeny
Laughter is very important in our life.
>>correct
Because, laughter make energy.
>>Laughter creates energy.
And laughing decreases your stress.
>>Thus laughing decreases our stress.
And I heard \'laughing increases your life span by an hour\'.
>>correct
I also agree.
>>correct
In a proverb, \'Smile brings good luck\'. Therefore laughter is important.
>>correct
Nice answer on your essay. Hehehehe
We need to laugh all the time so that we would live long.
Take care!!!
T. Jeny
Laughter is very important in our life.
>>correct
Because, laughter make energy.
>>Laughter creates energy.
And laughing decreases your stress.
>>Thus laughing decreases our stress.
And I heard \'laughing increases your life span by an hour\'.
>>correct
I also agree.
>>correct
In a proverb, \'Smile brings good luck\'. Therefore laughter is important.
>>correct
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