Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, James.
We started new term today.
So I decided to restart to do the homework. hahaha
Homework:
There are efficient transportation in Korea.
We have subway, bus, train and express bus.
Especially, bus and subway are very useful.
Most of the people use the bus and subway when they commute.
If I am taking a bus and I want to transfer other bus or subway, I can transfer freely.
It\'s free.
There is great system in Korea.
I will try to do the homework.
Have a good day. see you tomorrow.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]~ Grateful Tuesday to the both of us!
I hope that you had a refreshing day. Anyway, it\'s a new week and let\'s get the most out of it! Thanks for doing your homework!
>>> TEACHER James
There are efficient transportation in Korea.
>>> There is efficient transportation in Korea.We have subway, bus, train and express bus.
>>> We have a subway, bus, train, and express bus.
Especially, bus and subway are very useful.
>>> Especially, buses and the subway are very useful.
Most of the people use the bus and subway when they commute.
>>> CORRECT
If I am taking a bus and I want to transfer other bus or subway, I can transfer freely.
>>> If I am taking a bus and I want to transfer another bus or subway, I can transfer freely.
It\'s free.
>>> CORRECT
If I am taking a bus and I want to transfer other bus or subway, I can transfer freely.
>>> If I am taking a bus and I want to transfer another bus or subway, I can transfer freely.
It\'s free.
>>> CORRECT
There is great system in Korea.
There is great system in Korea.
>>> There is a great system in Korea.
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