Homework:
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay: What is the best and effective way to learn another language?
Needless to say , I think practice makes perfect
However, It\'s difficult for me to do that
I am someone\'s wife, someone\'s daughter,someone\'s mother, someone\'s daughter-in-law, someone\'s sister,,,and so on
I want to open my mind to everyone~~~~
I would feel my limits
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I guess learning a language is truly about practice. If we practice what we learn through speaking and active listening, we can know if our language ability has improved or not. I know that you are a hard-working person and you never fail to practice your English, so keep it up!
-Rachel
Needless to say , I think practice makes perfect
>> correct (awesome sentence)
However, It\'s difficult for me to do that>> correct (another good sentence)
I am someone\'s wife, someone\'s daughter,someone\'s mother, someone\'s daughter-in-law, someone\'s sister,,,and so on
I am someone\'s wife, someone\'s daughter,someone\'s mother, someone\'s daughter-in-law, someone\'s sister,,,and so on
>> I am someone\'s wife, daughter, mother, daughter-in-law, sister and family.
I want to open my mind to everyone~~~~
I want to open my mind to everyone~~~~
>> correct (great sentence)
I would feel my limits
I would feel my limits
>> I want to know my limits.
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