Homework

2020-06-24 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Hello, James. I did the homework. See you later. Do you think it is important to follow a country’s customs when you visit there? Discuss it in 5-6 sentences. Sure. I think follow a country\'s customs are important. because our action make bad or good atmosphere. If I learn their customs and do that, they feel good. I think this behavior is solicitude. I we have solicitude each other, Our relationship will be better.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thank you for doing your homework~ Happy Wednesday stay positive. You\'re right!
Have a wonderful day~!^^
>>> TEACHER JAMES

Sure. I think follow a country\'s customs are important.

>>> Sure. I think following a country\'s customs are important.
because our action make bad or good atmosphere.

>>> because our actions make a bad or good atmosphere.
If I learn their customs and do that, they feel good.

>>> CORRECT
I think this behavior is solicitude.

>>> CORRECT
I we have solicitude each other, Our relationship will be better.

>>> We have solicitude for each other, Our relationship will be better.

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