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What\'s your favorite pizza topping?
I don\'t have specific favorite topping in pizza, however if the pizza doesn\'t have cheeze then I wouldn\'t eat it. What if the pizza not included cheeze, could we call it pizza? Plus, I also like Pepperoni. It adds salty taste in the pizza and also it gives mouthfeel in your mouth. I think these two kinds of topping are my favorites.
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I don\'t have specific favorite topping in pizza, however if the pizza doesn\'t have cheeze then I wouldn\'t eat it.
>>I don\'t have a specific favorite to
What if the pizza not included cheeze, could we call it pizza?
>>What if there is no cheese included in a pizza, could we call it pizza?
Plus, I also like Pepperoni.
>>CORRECT
It adds salty taste in the pizza and also it gives mouthfeel in your mouth.
>>It adds a salty taste in the pizza and and it also gives a good feeling in your mouth.
I think these two kinds of topping are my favorites.
>>I think these two kinds of toppings are my favorites.
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