homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you prefer swimming in a swimming pool or in the sea, in a river or in a lake? Why?
In fact, I can\'t say that I know how to swim. I learned swimming once but it\'s almost 30 years ago so I forgot everything. If I can wear a life jacket then I prefer to swim in the sea because I like snorkeling. I like observing how the fishes swim under the water. The view of under the sea is always good and snorkeling is a very attractive activity.
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In fact, I can\'t say that I know how to swim.
>>CORRECT
I learned swimming once but it\'s almost 30 years ago so I forgot everything.
>>I learned swimming once but it\'s almost been 30 years ago so I already forgot everything.
If I can wear a life jacket then I prefer to swim in the sea because I like snorkeling.
>>CORRECT
I like observing how the fishes swim under the water.
>>CORRECT
The view of under the sea is always good and snorkeling is a very attractive activity.
>>CORRECT
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