homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay:What makes a great teacher?
This question is important as teacher but difficult / difficulty ( Is it okay to use grammar?) or it is difficult
I think a great teacher is the very someone who teach everything well which they want as well as understand student\'s heart
I am currently student to you and teacher to someone
I am ashamed and limted but try to be funny, be happy , be kind, have confident in front of someone who need me
That\'s why I have studied English for children who want English but no money / have no money ( I get confused grammar )
(Is it okay to use both them ?)
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Wow, that was really fast-thank you for answering this question. I agree that it is difficult to be a teacher, but you are a great one. I mean, you want to help the children who have no money to learn English, so you have a good heart. Although you have limitations for now, I am sure that you will be able to teach well in the future as you work hard to practice your English. ^^
-Rachel
This question is important as teacher but difficult / difficulty ( Is it okay to use grammar?) or it is difficult
>> This question is important as a teacher but it is difficult.
I think a great teacher is the very someone who teach everything well which they want as well as understand student\'s heart
I think a great teacher is the very someone who teach everything well which they want as well as understand student\'s heart
>> I think a great teacher is someone who teaches everything well, which they want, as well as someone who understands a student\'s heart.
I am currently student to you and teacher to someone
I am currently student to you and teacher to someone
>> I am currently a student to you and a teacher to someone.
I am ashamed and limted but try to be funny, be happy , be kind, have confident in front of someone who need me
I am ashamed and limted but try to be funny, be happy , be kind, have confident in front of someone who need me
>> I am embarrassed and have limitations, but I try to be funny, happy, kind and confident in front of someone who needs me.
That\'s why I have studied English for children who want English but no money / have no money ( I get confused grammar )
That\'s why I have studied English for children who want English but no money / have no money ( I get confused grammar )
>> That\'s why I have studied English to help children who want to learn it but have no money. (we use have no money because the subject is children)
(Is it okay to use both them ?)
(Is it okay to use both them ?)
>> correct
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