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2020-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Hello, James. I did the homework. Thank you. Have a wonderful day!! HOMEWORK: Is it okay to look different from other people or should you look the same as other people? Discuss it in 5-6 sentences. I think we don\'t need look different from other people and look the same as other people. Because it depends on a person\'s personality. I don\'t know How I look to people. Whether it\'s a good or not, that\'s me. I think It\'s really important my mindset and thought than appearance.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!!!

It is nice of you to answer your homework. I know that you can learn from this activities that will help you know more about sentence construction.

Have a nice day ahead.

T. JAMES

I think we don\'t need look different from other people and look the same as other people.

>>> I think we don\'t need to look different from other people and look the same as other people.
Because it depends on a person\'s personality.

>>> CORRECT
I don\'t know How I look to people.

>>> CORRECT
Whether it\'s a good or not, that\'s me.

>>> Whether it\'s good or not, that\'s me.
I think It\'s really important my mindset and thought than appearance.

>>> I think It\'s really important to have a good mindset and thoughts than having a good appearance.

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