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I agree that children should do chores. First reason, there are many working families these days. Parents are very busy, so they have not many times for chores. So they will need the help for children. Second reason, Learning simple chores can be useful later. Therefore I agree.
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>>correct
First reason, there are many working families these days.
First reason, there are many working families these days.
>>correct
Parents are very busy, so they have not many times for chores.
Parents are very busy, so they have not many times for chores.
>>Parents are very busy so they don\'t have the time to do their chores.
So they will need the help for children.
So they will need the help for children.
>>Thus they need their children\'s help.
Second reason, Learning simple chores can be useful later.
Second reason, Learning simple chores can be useful later.
>>The second reason is that learning simple chores can be useful later.
Therefore I agree.
Therefore I agree.
>>correct
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