homework
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Which hobbies are the most popular with women in your country?
In my country, many women enjoy to exercise at the gym or sport clubs like swimming ,zumba dance(move her body widely), yoga,,,etc
Especially , Zumba dance is hot in my country to lose their weight or stay their health
In spire of corona 19, It is all booked
I have ever done yoga but I haven\'t
Flankly speaking, when I wear short sleeved shirt at the center to do yoga , people who do yoga see and were surprised due to my allergy skin
I don\'t want them to see my skin
Sometimes I do yoga at home alone with vedio shows
The more we are old, the more we have to take care of ourselves
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Hello [이름]!
Thanks for sharing with me about the popular hobby that women have in your country. It\'s fun to know that women enjoy doing zumba. I guess most women around the wold do it also for fun and exercise. It\'s okay, you can do yoga at home so others won\'t see you.
-Rachel
In my country, many women enjoy to exercise at the gym or sport clubs like swimming ,zumba dance(move her body widely), yoga,,,etc>>correct
Especially , Zumba dance is hot in my country to lose their weight or stay their health
Especially , Zumba dance is hot in my country to lose their weight or stay their health
>> Zumba is especially trendy in my country for losing weight and maintianing one\'s health.
In spire of corona 19, It is all booked
In spire of corona 19, It is all booked
>> Inspite of COVID-19, all classes are booked.
I have ever done yoga but I haven\'t
I have ever done yoga but I haven\'t
>> I have done yoga but not consistently.
Flankly speaking, when I wear short sleeved shirt at the center to do yoga , people who do yoga see and were surprised due to my allergy skin
Flankly speaking, when I wear short sleeved shirt at the center to do yoga , people who do yoga see and were surprised due to my allergy skin
>> Frankly speaking, when I wear short sleeves to do yoga at the center, people get surprised when they see me because of my skin allergy.
I don\'t want them to see my skin
I don\'t want them to see my skin
>> correct
Sometimes I do yoga at home alone with vedio shows
Sometimes I do yoga at home alone with vedio shows
>> correct (we just spell video as v-i-d-e-o)
The more we are old, the more we have to take care of ourselvesl
>> The more we get older, the more we have to take care of ourselves.
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