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2020-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lucy

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1. I think it is not good to use herbicides and pesticides. But it is necessary in modern times. Because the herbicides and pesticides are very useful for the farming. There are many bad factors which are insects and weeds when farmer do farming for the farm work. So I think they should use as much the herbicides and pesticides as they need. I think they shouldn\'t be completely banned. Because it is useful to make growth of agricultural products. However, we know that they make to aggravate environmental pollution and people\'s health. On the other hand, it is necessary for rapid growth of farm products. Therefore, we have to develop new technology which is eco-friendly for the farm products.

강사 첨삭

Thank you An!
~Lucy

I think it is not good to use herbicides and pesticides.
>>CORRECT!
But it is necessary in modern times.
>>CORRECT!
Because the herbicides and pesticides are very useful for the farming.
>>CORRECT!
There are many bad factors which are insects and weeds when farmer do farming for the farm work.
>>CORRECT!
So I think they should use as much the herbicides and pesticides as they need.
>>CORRECT!
I think they shouldn\'t be completely banned.
>>CORRECT!
Because it is useful to make growth of agricultural products.
>>CORRECT!
However, we know that they make to aggravate environmental pollution and people\'s health.
>>However, we know that they aggravate environmental pollution and people\'s health.
On the other hand, it is necessary for rapid growth of farm products.
>>CORRECT!
Therefore, we have to develop new technology which is eco-friendly for the farm products.
>>CORRECT!

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