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2020-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Hello, James. I didn\'t the homework 2 times. I remember that. So I sit in front of my desk now. :) HOMEWORK: Is aging more difficult for men or women? Why? Discuss it in 5-6 sentences. I think women feel more difficult about aging than men. In my case, I usually worry about my wrinkle in my face and neck. ;;;; So I find good food and cosmetic. I sometime ask him. How can I do for keeping my young? He always answer. We can\'t anything. We need to accept out aging. I know that. Hahaha But I will try to aging slowly. :) Therefore I think women feel sensitive about aging than men. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thanks for completing your homework. Keep it up!
Have a good day!
I think you\'re right!
>>> TEACHER JAMES

I think women feel more difficult about aging than men.

>>> CORRECT
In my case, I usually worry about my wrinkle in my face and neck. ;;;;

>>> CORRECT
So I find good food and cosmetic.

>>> So I find good food and cosmetics.
I sometime ask him. How can I do for keeping my young?

>>> Sometimes I ask him, what can I do to maintain my youngness.
He always answer. We can\'t anything. We need to accept out aging.

>>> He always answers. We can\'t do anything. We need to accept our aging.
I know that. Hahaha

>>> CORRECT
But I will try to aging slowly. :)

>>> But I will try to age slowly. :)

>>OR But I will try my best to look young than my age.

Therefore I think women feel sensitive about aging than men.
>>> CORRECT

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