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2020-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 James

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Hello, James. I did the homework one more. HOMEWORK: How would you help someone who says he/she is bored? Discuss it in 5-6 sentences. My sister often says she is bored. If she is bored, we send a message by kakaotalk or we meet and eat delicious food. And I listen to her worry. There is another women who says she is bored. It\'s my daughter. She always says she is bored. I play with her at that time. I also will play with her this weekend. :))) Thank you for checking my homework. Have a wonderful weekend. See you on Monday.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름], Thanks for completing your homework. Keep it up!
Have a good day!
>>> TEACHER JAMES

My sister often says she is bored.

>>> CORRECT
If she is bored, we send a message by kakaotalk or we meet and eat delicious food.

>>> If she is bored, we send messages by kakaotalk or we will meet and eat delicious food.
And I listen to her worry.

>>> And I listen to her worries.

There is another women who says she is bored.

>>> There is another woman who says she is bored.

It\'s my daughter.

>>> CORRECT
She always says she is bored.

>>> CORRECT
I play with her at that time.

>>> I will play with her at that time.
I also will play with her this weekend. :)))

>> I will also play with her this weekend. :))

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