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Do you think that rich people make more friends?
I think the number of friends would be decided by his personality. Nevertheless, rich people apparently have a few strengths when they try to make a friend. First, they can take more time to meet new friends because they can control their schedule more freely. Next, rich people have more chance to meet various kinds of people. They can have hobbies which are very expensive and normally poor people can\'t. However, personality is the most important matter to keep a connection with his friends so I am not sure that rich people have more friends.
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I think the number of friends would be decided by his personality.
>>I think the number of friends would depend on his personality.
Nevertheless, rich people apparently have a few strengths when they try to make a friend.
>>CORRECT
First, they can take more time to meet new friends because they can control their schedule more freely.
>>CORRECT
Next, rich people have more chance to meet various kinds of people.
>>Next, rich people have more chances to meet various kinds of people.
They can have hobbies which are very expensive and normally poor people can\'t.
>>They can have expensive hobbies compared to poor people.
However, personality is the most important matter to keep a connection with his friends so I am not sure that rich people have more friends.
>>However, personality is the most important matter to keep a connection with friends so, I am not sure if rich people have more friends.
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