homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Would you rather eat in a restaurant or eat at home? Why?
I am not picky when I\'m eating. I don\'t care whether if the eating place is inside of my house or not. I like cooking or delivering food at home and also, I like to go to a restaurant or go camping. Each activity has its own pros. First, I enjoy cooking and I can cook whatever I want to eat. Next, when I don\'t want to do anything then delivery food is the most useful way to eat something. Plus, when I want to eat special things and want to go somewhere moods, I would go out to the restaurant. Korea has lots of nice restaurants to eat or to spend time with special people. Lastly, when I want to do the more exciting activities then I would go camping.
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I am not picky when I\'m eating.
>>CORRECT
I don\'t care whether if the eating place is inside of my house or not.
>>I don\'t care whether or not I eat inside my house or not.
I like cooking or delivering food at home and also, I like to go to a restaurant or go camping.
>>I like cooking or having food delivered at home and I also like going to a restaurant or going camping.
Each activity has its own pros.
>>CORRECT
First, I enjoy cooking and I can cook whatever I want to eat.
>>CORRECT
Next, when I don\'t want to do anything then delivery food is the most useful way to eat something.
>>Next, when I don\'t want to cook, then delivery food is the best solution.
Plus, when I want to eat special things and want to go somewhere moods, I would go out to the restaurant.
>>Plus, when I want to eat special things and have the mood to go somewhere, I would go to the restaurant.
Korea has lots of nice restaurants to eat or to spend time with special people.
>>CORRECT
Lastly, when I want to do the more exciting activities then I would go camping.
>>CORRECT
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