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2020-06-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Essay: When you were a student, were you sensitive when you took your exams? What did you do? When I went to school, I was very sensitive such as uneasy, uncomfortable, nervous, annoyance If I come up with at that time I feel sorry to bother my mother I wanted to be perfect but I didn\'t I wanted to get good grade but I didn\'t Frankly speaking I\'m still not that I Just smile ^*^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!
Thank you for showing diligence in answering your homework question. It doesn\'t matter if you are an average person, what mattes most is that you work hard and are happy with what you are doing. ^^
When I went to school, I was very sensitive such as uneasy, uncomfortable, nervous, annoyance.
>> When I was a student, I was very sensitive, uneasy, uncomfortable, nervous and got easily annoyed. 
If I come up with at that time I feel sorry to bother my mother
>> If I felt those emotions, I would feel sorry for bothering my mother. 
I wanted to be perfect but I didn\'t
>> I wanted to be perfect but I couldn\'t. 
I wanted to get good grade but I didn\'t
>> I wanted to get good grades, but I didn\'t/ 
Frankly speaking I\'m still not that
>> Frankly speaking, I am still an average person.
I Just smile ^*^
>> correct

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