homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
If you are able to learn something new immediately what would it be and why?
If it\'s possible I would learn how to fly an airplane. I heard that learning aviation costs a lot and it also takes lots of effort. For instance, one of my friends went to an aviation school years ago. He tried to get the license but he couldn\'t finish it because it\'s too expensive. If you want to get the license you would need to fill the 1000 hours of aviation and it costs a lot. If I don\'t have to care for anything then I would learn aviation. I think that it looks cool and I could use it in case if something happens.
강사 첨삭
Wow~
I think that\'s amazing~
I would probably also do the same!
It\'s very practical.
If it\'s possible I would learn how to fly an airplane.
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I heard that learning aviation costs a lot and it also takes lots of effort.
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For instance, one of my friends went to an aviation school years ago.
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He tried to get the license but he couldn\'t finish it because it\'s too expensive.
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If you want to get the license you would need to fill the 1000 hours of aviation and it costs a lot.
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If I don\'t have to care for anything then I would learn aviation.
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I think that it looks cool and I could use it in case if something happens.
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