homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Umm, I recommend [Maze Runner].
It’s about escape the maze.
I can introduce the beginning.
One day, Tomas(main character) is coming unknown village.
He can’t remember everything.
Because Wikied(villain group) delete his memory,
And confine the village.
So Tomas and his friend want to go out the village,
but a maze block the village.
Next story is about Tomas and his friends are escape the maze.
강사 첨삭
Hi Paul! I am grateful that you have put more details in your homework today! Good job!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
>>I recommend the movie Maze Runner.
It’s about escape the maze.
>>It\'s about escaping the maze.
I can introduce the beginning.
>>CORRECT
One day, Tomas(main character) is coming unknown village.
>>One day, Tomas is going to an unknown village.
He can’t remember everything.
>>CORRECT
Because Wikied(villain group) delete his memory, And confine the village.
>>Because the wicked deleted his memory and confine the village.
So Tomas and his friend want to go out the village,
but a maze block the village.
but a maze block the village.
>>So Tomas and his friend want to go out of the village but a maze block the vilage.
Next story is about Tomas and his friends are escape the maze.
>>The next story is about Tomas and his friends escaping the maze.
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