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I like the challenge of knowing the outome of the course like my university admission. Because I feel a sense of accomplishment that I finished one by one and feel like I\'m getting points in the game.
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I like the challenge of knowing the outome of the course like my university admission.
>> I like the challenge of knowing the outcome of a course, like my university admission.
Because I feel a sense of accomplishment that I finished one by one and feel like I\'m getting points in the game.
>> It is because, I feel a sense of accomplishment when I finished something a little at a time and feel like I\'m getting more points in the game.
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