Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you think technology is stressful? Discuss it in 5-6 sentences.
I think most technology makes people relax, not it makes people stressful. Without technology, we can\'t keep basic nessesary and always get stressed by thinking about it. Fresh foods, safe house, and clean clothes are come from high technology. Moreover, technology has nothing to do with the reason why we get stress. It depends on people\'s feeling who accept the technology and the people who use technology as a bad purpose. There is no reason why we blame technology.
강사 첨삭
Hi Leo,
That is short but concise and clear answer!
Have fun this weekend!
Teacher James
>>> I think most technology makes people relax, not to make people stressed.
Without technology, we can\'t keep basic nessesary and always get stressed by thinking about it.
>>> Without technology, we can\'t keep basic necessary and always get stressed by thinking about it.
Fresh foods, safe house, and clean clothes are come from high technology.
>>> Fresh foods, safe houses, and clean clothes are coming from high technology.
Moreover, technology has nothing to do with the reason why we get stress.
>>> CORRECT
It depends on people\'s feeling who accept the technology and the people who use technology as a bad purpose.
>>> It depends on people\'s feelings who accept technology and the people who use technology as a bad purpose.
There is no reason why we blame technology.
>>> CORRECT
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