HOMEWORK
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, James.
I did the homework late. ^^
Have a good day!!
Can you talk about three things you like about yourself? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
I like myself a lot.
First, I like my appearance. My appearance looks kind of kind.
It\'s just my thinking... :)
Second, I like my deep thinking.
My thinking sometimes give a stress. But I hardly hurt others
third, I like my self-reflection.
As most of the people get older, They think that their thinking and behaviors are right
But I like that I became mature and changed my thinking by my self-reflection.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름], Thanks for completing your homework. Keep it up! I agree with your answer!:)
Have a good day!
>>> TEACHER JAMES
I like myself a lot.
>>> CORRECT
>>OR: I love myself.
First, I like my appearance.
First, I like my appearance.
>>> CORRECT
My appearance looks kind of kind.
>> My appearance is one of kind.
It\'s just my thinking... :)
>>> CORRECT
Second, I like my deep thinking.
Second, I like my deep thinking.
>>> CORRECT
My thinking sometimes give a stress. But I hardly hurt others
My thinking sometimes give a stress. But I hardly hurt others
>>> My thinking sometimes gives stress But, I hardly hurt others
third, I like my self-reflection.
>>> CORRECT
As most of the people get older, They think that their thinking and behaviors are right
As most of the people get older, They think that their thinking and behaviors are right
>>> Most of the people when they get older, they think that their thinking and behaviors are right.
But I like that I became mature and changed my thinking by my self-reflection.
But I like that I became mature and changed my thinking by my self-reflection.
>>> But I like that I became mature and changed my thinking through my self-reflection.
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