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I vow to lose my weight in the first place. and I also have planned that I would save enough money to buy a brand new apartment just not to live with our parents in law. I am also hoping to get improved my English ability with your help~. I do get to go on a trip abroad~!! As you know~ One of the most significant things is our family's health. Anyway I will get my fingers crossed for you~!!!!

Hi! I had a lot of fun reading your almost perfect written output. I had to make minimal corrections and some suggestions to make your sentences better. Thank you for sharing your plans with me. Happy New Year!^^ This is the beginning of another prosperous year and we have a lot to thank for the past year as well as a lot to look forward to for this year!^^, -Teacher Jane-   I vow to lose my weight in the first place. >>CORRECT And I also have planned that I would save enough money to buy a brand new apartment just not to live with our parents in law. >>CORRECT >>OR And I am also planning to save enough money to buy a brand new apartment so we could live alone and not with our parents in law. I am also hoping to get improved my English ability with your help~. >>I am also planning to improve my English skills with your help. I do get to go on a trip abroad~!! >>CORRECT As you know~ One of the most significant things is our family\'s health. >>CORRECT Anyway I will get my fingers crossed for you~!!!! >>CORRECT