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2020-07-03 · 첨삭 강사 Rachel

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Homework: Why do some people have more difficulty than others when learning a language ( smiling for a while) Well., someone said \" If everything is easy to achieve, people who made it wouldn\'t been respected Genius can\'t follow people who making effort people who making effort can\'t follow people who enjoying I know I need effort but it\'s difficult for me to do

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Hello [이름]!
I also smiled when I saw what you have written (smiling for a while). I guess each person has a different learning ability. There are those who easily learn, and there are those who take some time to learn something, but whatever it is, learning is necessary for all of us because it is what makes us understand life and each other better. So, let\'s keep learning. ^ ^
-Rachel 
Well., someone said \" If everything is easy to achieve, people who made it wouldn\'t been respected\".
>> correct (awesome sentence)
Genius can\'t follow people who making effort
>> Geniuses can\'t follow or understand people who put a lot of effort. 
people who making effort can\'t follow people who enjoying
>> People who put a lot of effort can\'t understand those who are enjoying what they are doing. 
I know I need effort but it\'s difficult for me to do
>> correct

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