Homework~~~~
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My answer is yes! because in mordern times we disopse of everything by using application like phone banking, navigation even request delivery and thease days because of the corona virus, we have online clas. So, I think our society is too dependant on technology like smartphone.
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I totally agree! ^_^
My answer is yes!
>> Correct.
because in mordern times we disopse of everything by using application like phone banking, navigation even request delivery and thease days because of the corona virus, we have online clas.
>> It because, in modern times, we dispose of everything by using an application like phone banking, navigation, and even request for delivery. These days because of the corona virus, we have online classes.
So, I think our society is too dependant on technology like smartphone.
>> So, I think our society is too dependent on technology like smartphones.
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