homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
What is the usual location for a barbecue in your country? (The beach, the mountains, someone\'s garden)
In Korea, there are lots of places to have a barbecue. First, we usually go to a restaurant when we want to eat a barbecue. There are tons of restaurants that sale a barbecue in Korea. Also, there is a special kind of a barbecue called \'Samgyeopsal\'. Most Korean like this food so that many Korean dramas and movies show the situation that people eat \'Samgyeopsal\' in a restaurant. Plus, there are some camping sites around the city. Many people in Korea like to go camp and there are some clubs for that. If you don\'t have any equipment for camping you can go \'Glamping\'. Some businesses open the camp site with full equipment for the people who have nothing but money. They serve everything included food.
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Hello [이름]~
I hope you have a good day!
I enjoyed reading this!
I wish I could go camping too~
Thank you for sharing your ideas~
Have a good day!
>>CORRECT
First, we usually go to a restaurant when we want to eat a barbecue.
>>CORRECT
There are tons of restaurants that sale a barbecue in Korea.
>>There are tons of restaurants that sell barbecues in Korea.
Also, there is a special kind of a barbecue called \'Samgyeopsal\'.
>>Also, there are special kinds of barbecues called \"Samgyeopsal\".
Most Korean like this food so that many Korean dramas and movies show the situation that people eat \'Samgyeopsal\' in a restaurant.
>>Most Koreans like this food so many Korean dramas and movies show the situations of people eating \"Samgyeopsal\" in a restaurant.
Plus, there are some camping sites around the city.
>>CORRECT
Many people in Korea like to go camp and there are some clubs for that.
>>Many people in Korea like to go camping and there are some clubs for that.
If you don\'t have any equipment for camping you can go \'Glamping\'.
>>CORRECT
Some businesses open the camp site with full equipment for the people who have nothing but money.
>>CORRECT
They serve everything included food.
>>They serve everything including food.
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