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Cause it is not good for my health. And my father also knows that it is not good for me so he is saying that I should not smoke in the future.
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Cause it is not good for my health.
>>Because it is not good for my health.
And my father also knows that it is not good for me so he is saying that I should not smoke in the future.
>>And my father also knows that it is not good for me, so he is saying that I should not smoke in the future.
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