homework
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Do you prefer Polaroid or digital cameras? Answer in 5 sentences or more.
Actually, I like taking pictures, so I like both. So I have both. I think there are pros and cons.
In the past, I really wanted to have a Polaroid. because It was so interesting that it came out as soon as I took a picture.
But when I bought Polaroid for the first time, I used it only a few times and then I didn\'t use it well. The reason why is the number of films was so small that if I take 10 shots, I have to change it to a new film and it cost a lot of money because the price of the film is expensive. I also like digital cameras because they have clear picture quality, but it is also heavy to carry around me, so I couldn\'t carry that well. So actually I keep taking pictures with my cell phone camera these days.
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Actually, I like taking pictures, so I like both.
>> Correct
So I have both.
>> This is also the reason why I have both.
I think there are pros and cons.
>> Correct
In the past, I really wanted to have a Polaroid. because It was so interesting that it came out as soon as I took a picture.
In the past, I really wanted to have a Polaroid. because It was so interesting that it came out as soon as I took a picture.
>> In the past, I really wanted to have a Polaroid because it was so interesting to have your picture come out as soon as you took it.
But when I bought Polaroid for the first time, I used it only a few times and then I didn\'t use it well.
But when I bought Polaroid for the first time, I used it only a few times and then I didn\'t use it well.
>> However, when I bought a Polaroid for the first time, I used it only a few times and then I didn\'t use it that much anymore.
The reason why is the number of films was so small that if I take 10 shots, I have to change it to a new film and it cost a lot of money because the price of the film is expensive.
>> The reason was the number of films was so small that if I took 10 shots, I had to change to a new film and it cost a lot of money because the price of the film was high.
I also like digital cameras because they have clear picture quality, but it is also heavy to carry around me, so I couldn\'t carry that well.
>> I also like digital cameras because they have clear picture quality, but it is also too heavy to carry around.
So actually I keep taking pictures with my cell phone camera these days.
>> Correct
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