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2020-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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The twin towers of the World Trade Center _was_(was / were) more than just buildings. Brash, glitzy, and grand, they_were_ (are / were) the most recognizable symbols of New York. The World Trade Center was _conceived_ (conceiving / conceived) in the early 1960s by the Downtown-Lower Manhattan Development Association. In 1962, Minoru Yamasaki and Associates of Michigan _were_(was / were) hired as the architects. Eventually, Yamasaki _decided_(decided / deciding) on two huge towers. Critics _argued_(argued / arguing / argue) that a modern monolith would rob New York of character, ruin the skyline, disrupt television reception, and strain city services. However, the project _was approved_ (approved / was approved) and construction began in 1966.

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T. Jeny


The twin towers of the World Trade Center _was_(was / were) more than just buildings.
>>The twin towers of the World Trade Center were more than just buildings.
 Brash, glitzy, and grand, they_were_ (are / were) the most recognizable symbols of New York. 
>>correct
The World Trade Center was _conceived_ (conceiving / conceived) in the early 1960s by the Downtown-Lower Manhattan Development Association. 
>>correct
In 1962, Minoru Yamasaki and Associates of Michigan _were_(was / were) hired as the architects. 
>>correct
Eventually, Yamasaki _decided_(decided / deciding) on two huge towers. Critics _argued_(argued / arguing / argue) that a modern monolith would rob New York of character, ruin the skyline, disrupt television reception, and strain city services.
>>correct
 However, the project _was approved_ (approved / was approved) and construction began in 1966.
>>correct

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