homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Homework : What are some qualities that you think are important in a spouse or partner?
I think It\'s important for couple to take care of each other
I want my partner to understand my mind
I want him to put himself in my shoes
In nature I think it\'s hard to have thought like above sentences
I think we need a lot of effort one another
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Thank you for this responding to the homework you were given. I agree with your idea that couples should try to understand each other. I guess being considerate of each other would make the relationship last. ^ ^
-Rachel
I think It\'s important for couple to take care of each other
>> correct
>> Couples should take care of each other.
I want my partner to understand my mind
I want my partner to understand my mind
>> correct
>> I want my spouse to understand my mind.
I want him to put himself in my shoes
I want him to put himself in my shoes
>> correct
In nature I think it\'s hard to have thought like above sentences
In nature I think it\'s hard to have thought like above sentences
>> Naturally, it is difficult to be in the situation I just described.
I think we need a lot of effort one another
I think we need a lot of effort one another
>> I think we need to exert a lot of effort to understand each other.
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