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Essay: What, in general, do you think are the qualities of a good political leader?
In my opinoin, what he said has a sense of responsibility
I think he must work as spokeperson instead of the weak
He have to know what national people want
He must have conscience as little as possible
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Hello [이름]!
Thanks for this giving me your thoughts about the question I asked you. I agree that a leader should have a sense of responsibility and not just promise anything to the people.
-Rachel
In my opinoin, what he said has a sense of responsibility
>> In my opinion, a leader should have a sense of responsibility especially if he promised something.
I think he must work as spokeperson instead of the weak
I think he must work as spokeperson instead of the weak
>> I think he must also act as a spokesperson for the weak.
He have to know what national people want
He have to know what national people want
>> Furthermore, he has to know what his constituents want.
He must have conscience as little as possible
He must have conscience as little as possible
>> Finally, he must have conscience no matter how small it is.
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