Homework !
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Where does pollution come from?
2. How clean is your country from pollution?
The kinds of pollution are air, water, soil pollution etc.
I introduce one of that, the air pollution.
The air pollution comes from car and factory.
I think sure our car and factory, but especially in the spring the other effect come from China.
Because of many factory air pollution in China, the air pollution blow.
In South Korea, it is serious problem, \"fine dust\".
I breath fine dust, I\'m thirsty.
So I have to wear a specific mask, KF mask.
When I go to anyway, I check the fine dust app for wearing mask.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon Vita!
Thank you for your homework today. Air pollution is really a serious problem nowadays. So, always wear a mask and stay healthy.
See you in class!
1. Where does pollution come from?2. How clean is your country from pollution?
The kinds of pollution are air, water, soil pollution, etc.
>> Correct
I introduce one of that, the air pollution.
I introduce one of that, the air pollution.
>> I will talk about one of the types of pollution.
The air pollution comes from car and factory.
The air pollution comes from car and factory.
>> Air pollution comes from cars and factories.
I think sure our car and factory, but especially in the spring the other effect come from China.
I think sure our car and factory, but especially in the spring the other effect come from China.
>> I am certain that cars and factories cause air pollution in our country, but in the spring, our air is also polluted by China.
Because of many factory air pollution in China, the air pollution blow.
Because of many factory air pollution in China, the air pollution blow.
>> Because there are many factories in China, their polluted air is being blown by the wind towards our country.
In South Korea, it is serious problem, \"fine dust\".
In South Korea, it is serious problem, \"fine dust\".
>> In South Korea, \"fine dust\" is a serious problem.
I breath fine dust, I\'m thirsty.
I breath fine dust, I\'m thirsty.
>> When I breathe the fine dust, I feel thirsty.
So I have to wear a specific mask, KF mask.
So I have to wear a specific mask, KF mask.
>> So, I have to wear a special mask, the KF mask.
When I go to anyway, I check the fine dust app for wearing mask.
When I go to anyway, I check the fine dust app for wearing mask.
>> When I go somewhere, I check the level of fine dust first through a fine dust app before wearing a mask.
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