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What do you think about self-driving cars?
I am sure I already got ready to enjoy self-driving cars. Self-driving technology has been being developed and a few models have already reached level-4 of the self-driving level. In my case, I own a level-2 of a self-driving car. It can control its speed if I turn on the cruise control system. Also, it has a lane departure avoidance system. When I am driving on a highway, I don\'t need to control my speed and direction. However, if I didn\'t control the handle for a while the car system would warn to keep control of the handle for safety reasons.
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Thank you for sharing your answers!
I hope you will get your dream car.
>> I am sure that I will be enjoying self-driving cars.
Self-driving technology has been being developed and a few models have already reached level-4 of the self-driving level.
>> Self-driving technology has been developed and a few models have already reached level-4 of the self-driving level.
In my case, I own a level-2 of a self-driving car.
>> In my case, I own a level 2 self-driving car.
It can control its speed if I turn on the cruise control system.
>>CORRECT
Also, it has a lane departure avoidance system.
>>CORRECT
When I am driving on a highway, I don\'t need to control my speed and direction.
>>CORRECT
However, if I didn\'t control the handle for a while the car system would warn to keep control of the handle for safety reasons.
>>However, if I don\'t control the handle for a while, the car\'s system will warn me to keep control of the handle for safety reasons.
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