homework
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Do you collect anything as a hobby?
I used to collect postal stamps and seals when I was very young. I stopped collecting but I had already made 2 books of postal stamps 15 years ago. I left those 2 books in my parents\' house and I think I am going to check them the next time when I visit there. Also, I collected some coins from some countries. However, I didn\'t start it for a hobby. I started it because some coins always remained whenever I got back from abroad trips. Finally, I collect some news articles related to the IT industry nowadays because it helps my study. The exam that I\'m preparing now asks almost everything about the IT industry. The state-of-art technology is usually announced by news articles and I need to prepare about these too. That\'s why I collect those kinds of news articles these days.
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I used to collect postal stamps and seals when I was very young.
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I stopped collecting but I had already made 2 books of postal stamps 15 years ago.
>>CORRECT
I left those 2 books in my parents\' house and I think I am going to check them the next time when I visit there.
>> I left those 2 books in my parents\' house and I think I am going to check them the next time I visit.
Also, I collected some coins from some countries.
>>CORRECT
However, I didn\'t start it for a hobby.
>>CORRECT
I started it because some coins always remained whenever I got back from abroad trips.
>>I started it because some coins were left whenever I got back from trips abroad.
Finally, I collect some news articles related to the IT industry nowadays because it helps my study.
>>CORRECT
The exam that I\'m preparing now asks almost everything about the IT industry.
>>The exam that I\'m preparing for now asks almost everything about the IT industry.
The state-of-art technology is usually announced by news articles and I need to prepare about these too.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why I collect those kinds of news articles these days.
>>CORRECT
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